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[Milk]

tasty milk!

good job, dude. c:

[A Dead Legacy]

Only TOFA 2013 guys would get this!

[Thing]

very nice! wow! great fx!

[Delivery - NATA14]

Very good! Very cool! I like it!

[Ducktalez 6: Duck Knight]

I AM FUCKING GLAD YOU'VE UPLOADED MORE OF THESE ONTO NEWGROUNDS. :))))))

[The Hallo-Weenies Part 1]

For starters, I thought the video was alright itself. But I gotta run down some stuff which I think ruined the animation. I'll start off with the intro.
The intro was, in my opinion, didn't have much to offer. It was just some music with some character stills being moved onto the screen. Also if you're uploading this to YouTube, you're gonna have to change the intro theme, incase you wanna make some money off of this/not get a copyright strike (which is unlikely to happen). Also, the art you did for the title card was decent, so I have nothing to say about that. The glow on the "Hallo-weenies" text did however peeve me, but not gonna stop you from doing that.
Onto the episode!
The start of the episode, seemed so much like the opening to the Eddsworld animation, "21ft Under The Sea". And how the car window closes up is really cheap. If you wanna do something like that, make the window square, get a masking layer on top of the window layer, tween the mask up, and it'll make it better. But I can tell the background art is really good. Also, dude. I know there was a lot of work into this, but you have to do more with your character animation, and not tween them. It'll make the cartoon look cheap. The voice acting could've done better. The guys who did the voices here did do good acting, but however. You gotta remove the background noise (Audacity, Noise Removal). You could have done more with Billy's arms moving out (where he says "you ready to have the best halloween ever"), and the eyes could have opened more smoothly if you added some inbetweens. Where Shane turns around and goes WOAH, you could have made improvements to the turn, to make it smoother. And the tweening. God. The tweening. And as fromTerrace said, try to have a more followable plot, and not just random.

ratings (out of 10):
Animation: 6/10
Art: 7/10
Story: 5/10

Overall: 18/30

I would have given you 7 in animation, if it weren't for the amounts of tweening, but yeah. Good luck on the next part, Billy. Also, look up Ricepirate's video called "How to Make an Audition-Quality Home Recording Studio like you Robbed an Airport Baggage Claim".

-Gunboy

[Kombo Teaches Integers]

good

[Better Call Saul]

saul worked for me!